I spent the months of
September and October walking the Via de la Plata, an ancient pilgrimage route
that runs all the way up the west of Spain, from Seville to Santiago de
Compostela. It was a tough 1000
kilometre (650 mile) walk and, as I’ve never done long-distance walking before,
a major challenge. I damaged my foot in
the last hundred, and wasn’t at all sure I’d make it to the end, but through grit and determination, and with the encouragement and assistance of my kind brother
Raphael, I got there. (Though I’m still
feeling the after-effects a month later in my leg.)
It was an amazing experience
in all sorts of ways, but the most important was doing it with my brother. We’re both rapidly approaching the big 60
(he’s closer than I am), and we haven’t spent anything like that much time
together since we were about ten. But
we walked (and sang) together for fifty three days, and it was joyous.
We both kept a diary of our
Camino and, being a picture book writer, I’m now reworking mine in the form I
know and love best.
Because, as I’m always
telling children when they ask where I get my ideas from, that’s what you do -
you take a dose of real life - preferably something that really matters to you - you add a sprinkling of imagination, you stir it
and stir it and bob’s your uncle (or in this case Big Bear’s your brother…)
Here's us in Seville on the very first morning.
And here’s an early draft of day one.
And here’s an early draft of day one.
‘Wake up, Little Bear.
It’s time we were going!’
And at six o’clock,
while the world was still
sleeping,
they opened the door and
were off.
‘It’s dark,’ whispered
Little Bear,
as they left the lights
of the town behind them.
Big Bear pointed to the
full moon.
‘It’s all right,’ he
said. ‘She’ll keep us safe.’
They followed the yellow
arrows,
north, always northwards,
till they spotted an
early-morning café.
Big Bear had hot
chocolate.
Little Bear had lemonade
fizz.
‘Eight hundred and thirty
six, eight hundred and thirty seven…’ said Little Bear, counting as he
went. ‘How many more steps until we get
there, Big Bear?’
‘Oh, about half a
million,’ said Big Bear, with a shrug.
‘HALF A MILLION STEPS!’
Little Bear was shocked.
And it’ll be even more
for me, he thought. Mine are shorter
than his.
But when you’re walking
together down a long dirt road, you fall into step.
You can’t help but fall
into step.
Fab post and thanks for sharing your story. Wish my early drafts were as polished.
ReplyDeleteSounds like an amazing trip, Malachy. Looking forward to the picture book!
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on completing your challenge, here's to brotherly love and endurance - and success for Big Bear and Little Bear.
ReplyDeleteI love this and can't wait to read the rest.
ReplyDeleteAw, thanks Naomi. Lovely to see you here!
DeleteHi Malachy,
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful experience and I'm very glad you're turning it into something we can all appreciate too! Most of my picture book stories are based in some way on real life, but none yet has come so clearly from an event like that. Really looking forward to seeing more... Welcome back (bad leg 'n all)!
Congratulations on the incredible walk, Malachy. I love this and adore Little Bear having to take more steps and drinking lemonade fizz.
ReplyDeleteI do include little bits of life in my stories, but not in the way you're doing and there's such tenderness too.
Thanks, everyone. It's long for a picture book but, endurance being a key theme, the length seems to suit it. I just hope a friendly publisher feels the same.
ReplyDeleteAnd yes, it's much closer to life than I normally write, too. But somehow I already had the characters, the story, the setting, the emotion. It's pretty much all true except we're not bears!
But the best thing of all is that the two of you look so obviously like brothers, but also a little bit like bears! Whoever does the illustrations really needs to meet the two of you!
ReplyDeleteLove it, Pippa! Yabba-dabba-doo!
DeleteBeautiful!
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