6 a.m. Cat whinges at kitchen door. Writer goes down to feed
it. Also two more cats, and two
dogs. Writer watches the sun rise over
the mountain, and thinks.
7.30 a.m. Artist
awakens. Writer brings her a cup of
tea. Senior cat, waiting outside the
bedroom door, goes in for a cuddle.
8 a.m. Computer
on. Writer goes over the picture
book he's been working on for the previous two days. Changes ‘said’ to ‘asked’. Removes ‘and’ at the start of a
sentence. Then smiles. Brings Tea Two to artist.
9 a.m. Writer lets
out ducks and one-eyed rooster. Two
eggs. Artist appears downstairs, in
dressing gown.
10 a.m Writer takes
story up to the booley hut to read it out loud. Changes ‘And you!’ to ‘You are
too!’ Changes ‘way down’ to ‘deep
down’. Realises the story is a distillation, in a strange sort of way, of his first published picture book and of three recent near-misses. So he's actually been working on it for eighteen years...
10.30 a.m. Writer takes three runner bean plants from the
nursery on the balcony, and adds them to the teepee. He adds two courgette plants to the raised bed where the
surviving purple-sprouting broccoli live. (The snails love this bed, so he is
not very hopeful of success, but neither he nor artist can be bothered digging a new patch).
11.a m. Writer
changes ‘they’ to ‘the bears’. He adds
‘It’s hot out there!’ It is. Hotter, for longer, than it has been in the
six years he's lived on the island.
11.30 a.m. Artist is
off to her print workshop. Writer and
dogs cadge a lift to the mountain. No
mud on the bog as they start their walk. Amazing.
12.30 a.m. There's cloud at
the top. The only cloud in the
sky. Writer doesn't mind. He knows the view so well - down
over the lake, out to the islands - that he can see it in his mind. Hatches a plan to climb this mountain every birthday until he can no
more. Good plan.
1 p.m. Mobile phone punctures his reverie. (Writer was under strict instruction to keep
it on, which he would never normally do on a walk)
Artist is heading home early. Someone is coming to view her
paintings. Writer abandons plan to climb second hill.
2.45 p.m The someone
admires house and paintings. Leaves
with one (painting, not house). Artist
is happy. Writer is happy because artist is happy. Dogs are happy chewing a shoe.
3 p.m. Artist, writer and dogs walk to the beach. They swim.
The water is surprisingly warm.
4 p.m. Artist and
writer have siesta in writing hut.
Writing hut has many uses.
5.30 p.m. Writer
changes ‘asked’ back to ‘said’. Writer
is now content.
6 p.m. Writer waters flowers and vegetables. Most years the salt wind makes growing
anything difficult, but this is a special year. A very special year.
7 p.m. Writer adds an illustration guide to the top of the story, and decides it's ready. Story wings its way to agent. Writer smiles. Artist also smiles.
8 p.m. Writer and artist watch three episodes of The West
Wing. Writer and artist have never
watched The West Wing before. Aren't they the lucky couple?
11 p.m. As the light fades over the sea, writer takes dogs for nightwalk. Writer remembers
something. He has a blog to write for
the Picture Book Den. It is due to be
published the following morning...
Dream day, and a good plan for your birthday, Malachy - And a very beautiful picture of the mountain. Is that by the artist? She's very good, too! There's creative magic in them there hills.
ReplyDeleteYip, that's one of the artist's, Moira. And she's somewhat peeved that I cut off the top of the mountain!
DeleteThanks Moira! (From the artist)
DeleteThis is a lovely post Malachy - it made me laugh but it also has a simple beauty about it. You have captured the final editing process so well! Often with picture books, where every word matters, it is just a case of tinkering and tinkering with it. I imagine it's a bit like clipping Bonsai. Although the entirety of my knowledge of Bonsai comes from that scene in The Karate Kid...'Trust the picture' 'But how do I know if my picture is the right one?' 'If it comes from inside you, always right one.' Very profound for a Thursday morning.
ReplyDeleteAw, thanks Abie. I'll order The Karate Kid for when we've exhausted The West Wing!
DeleteWhat a lovely post in the inimitable Malachy rolling, lilting,not-one-redundant-word style.
ReplyDeleteHow sweet of you, Anthea. (And congratulations on your Guardian pick!)
DeleteLove this post, Malachy. It has the feel of a picture book about it.
ReplyDelete'Distillation' I think that is what picture books are all about.
Enjoy The West Wing!
Thank you Linda. Yes, the similarity between picture books and fine whisky / whiskey hadn't occured to me before. Perhaps that's why I'm drawn to both...
DeleteWhat a lovely day and a lovely post. And I really like the artist's picture of the mountain. The siesta sounds fab, too.
ReplyDeleteThanks Clare. Artist (Liz) is enjoying the response, too.
DeleteNot every day's a dream day, of course. Today I can't write a thing, and because my bike had an unexpected puncture, I missed out on a boat trip to the outer islands. I think I'll go and sleep it off...
But the good news is agent liked Little Bear, and it's winging its way to a publisher as we speak.
DeleteAdore this post, Malachy, though it brings out wistful brooding on my part (my own fault!). Sounds like an idyllic life (most of time) and I love the way you show us the tinkering of a manuscript and that in a roundabout way it was 18 years in the writing (it's always hard explaining that to people). And good luck, Little Bear.
ReplyDeleteOh we have our moments, Paeony. And, as Jonathan suspects below, the long wet stormy winters can be a trial. But I wouldn't live anywhere else. Or do anything else.
DeleteLittle Bear says thank you.
(On my first attempt I said something to the effect that...) I loved every word of that blog, I'd buy it if it were in book-form, it's so poetic and beautifully written. And I said how I particularly loved it having just visited your gorgeous house, with Liz's incredible artwork all over. --- I've told so many people about your house, even people in Anagaire who hadn't realised they had two artists living on Cruit. You are very very lucky to live where you do, but you translate the beauty of your surroundings into work we can all share. [God, I think I might be coming over all poetic myself!]
ReplyDeleteOh Liz - I'm so glad you made a second attempt at posting. That was a very lovely, very moving response.
DeleteAnd it was delightful to see you the other day - my Liz was particularly pleased!
Lovely post. I'm jealous.
ReplyDeleteDo you know the painter Sean McSweeney's work? From Sligo. Just down the road ;-) That mountain painting just brought him to my mind, not sure if his work is all that similar but I recollect some nice semi abstract bogs and the like in his work.
You must write a contrasting post for mid December, I bet the weather is a bit different ;-)
Yes, I really like his work, Jonathan. He captures the colour, the moods, the wildness of his little piece of Ireland quite superbly.
DeleteYou're right, of course - winters can be long, wet, dark and stormy. Thank goodness there are seven series of The West Wing, never mind Breaking Bad and all that other stuff we've never watched, to tide us over.
The wild weather has its attractions, though (if you've a warm house to come back to, or to watch it from). And there's not many places wilder than Donegal.
Malachy, nach iontach an saol atá agat. Tá mé in éad leat.
ReplyDeleteGo raibh maith agat!
DeleteLoved this ... it described what many of my writing days involve ... changing one word at a time to a different word (and re-reading the same paragraphs repeatedly!). I'm so glad to hear I'm not alone!
ReplyDeleteYou work and work it till it's perfect. You work it and work it till it reads so easily, so smoothly, it feel like it's tripping straight off the tongue. That's why people think writing picture books is easy - because, when they work, they feel easy. They're not - but they feel it.
DeleteBeautiful and evocative post. Who wouldn't want to be a picture book writer after reading this, Malachy!
ReplyDeleteWonderful stuff! What a very nice stage of life this middle-aged part can be.
ReplyDelete: ) : ) : ) : ) : ) (Pippa and Jane)
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