For years I
have taught people wanting to write books for children, and offered a critiquing service, most particularly
picture books, and I’ve tended to be fairly dogmatic in saying that writing
about characters who are inanimate objects doesn’t work for those books.
But now I’ve changed my mind.
Why was I so
anti the Olly the Oak Tree, Larry the Lamp Post, and Bronwen Broccoli sorts of characters?
They tend to
inhabit a particular kind of story; stories designed to carry a factual lesson
for small children. I’ve read dozens of
stories about fruit and vegetable characters which are supposed to encourage
children to eat their ‘five a day’. I’ve
read numerous stories about oak trees who experience the ecological life cycle
of a tree and the seasons. Or they are
making a stand against wicked developers who want to chop the tree down. The problem with both those basic story ideas
is that they muddle fact and fiction. If
you meet and get fond of a cuddly character called Bronwen Broccoli, you
probably don’t warm to the idea of boiling and eating her! If the ultimate baddy is somebody who chops
down a tree, then what are you doing, reading about it in a book that is made
from the pulp of a chopped down tree?! Even following the natural life cycle of a tree will inevitably end in death, and these stories tend to
fudge that uncomfortable truth. To me,
the issues of healthy eating and the ecology and life cycle of a tree are best
treated honestly, in beautiful imaginative books about reality, ie non-fiction.
As to the inanimate
object characters themselves, Larry the Lamp Post, Penny the Post Box, Willy
the Washing Machine etc, are static,
and that makes for a very static story, however lively the action around
them, and that isn't good visually ...
… Unless you
are wholehearted in your turning of an inanimate object into a human substitute,
and animate them more fully, giving not just faces but limbs too. Two recent brilliant
picture books have shown
what can be done.
Hug Me is written and illustrated by Simona
Ciraolo. The story is about Felipe (hooray, his
name doesn’t alliterate with ‘cactus’!) whose cactus family like to behave ‘properly’
and ‘never trespass into another’s personal space’. Look at their prickles, and that message is
clear. But little Felipe longs for
someone to ‘put their arms around him’ and ‘give him a hug’. A
new character comes along, but he’s a balloon.
The inevitable happens when balloon and prickly cactus get close, and that makes
Felipe feel even worse. So he lives a
lonely, solitary life … until he finds another lonely unhappy character, this
time a stone.
Stone and cactus characters can hug and make each other feel happy without a problem. It’s the beautiful logic of the story that really pleases. Hug Me is a first book by artist/writer Simona Ciraolo, and published by very new publisher Flying Eye Books.
Much higher
profile is prize-winning The Day The
Crayons Quit illustrated by Oliver Jeffers and written by Drew Daywalt
(whose more usual work, interestingly, has been in film). In this story, the crayons have revolted
against their child owner, Duncan. They
all have complaints about being used too much, or not enough, or always for the
same old things, and they’ve written him letters to express those
feelings.
Duncan's response is to produce a
stunning picture that makes full, and unobvious, use of all those colours.
Children's imaginations make them happily leap into ‘believing’ that a
cactus or a crayon can have human feelings and legs and arms. Maybe the secret to writing wonderful picture
book stories about inanimate objects is simply to ignore the fact that in real
life they are inanimate? Animate them
into being almost-humans, but still living lives we recognise from their object
existence. Then those characters
become engaging and funny, and so do their stories.
Or does that
only work with inanimate objects which start with the letter ‘c’?!
Are there other examples of really good picture books featuring characters which are things?
PS What is
that instinct to make names of children’s book characters alliterative all
about?
Pippa Goodhart www.pippagoodhart.co.uk
